“ As if someone who makes money via speculation by researching and taking risks with their own capital is “not as honorable” as someone who trades their time for a paycheck.”

This is a sentence fragment. There are successful sentence fragments which are used for effect, and then there are ones like this which make me think Rick Tastic just lost his thought mid-sentence, or he didn’t have a thought to begin with.

He could focus on clarity and precision in writing.